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UPIK ABU

 There was a beautiful girl named Upik Abu. She lived with a wicked stepmother and her two stepsisters. The stepmother was Jumiati and stepsisters were Ratih and Susan. They treated Upik Abu very badly and did not appreciate her near from her home. There was a king palace which was so beautiful and there would be held a big party. Her stepmother and her stepsisters were invited to attend the party. However, they did not allow her to went to the party. She ordered to see the dress party that would be worn by her mother and sisters. While, Upik Abu did not have time to see her dress. Her mother and her sisters went to the party and left Upik Abu alone at home. The story Upik Abu explained the she was felt very so sad, she entered the palace and prince Bobby was felling in love with Upik Abu.

Upik Abu felt very sad and cried. Between her tears, suddenly a fairy godmother appeared and said, ”Do not cry, I can send you to the ball now”, but Upik Abu kept crying and looked so sad. She said, “ I do not have a dress to wear in the ball”. The fairy godmother of course would not be worry and waved wand to trash from the “Upik Abu” old clothes into the new dress which was very beautiful. Furthermore, that fairy godmother touched Upik Abu foot with the wand and suddenly Upik Abu had beautiful glass slipper. Upik Abu was shocked and said,“ wow, thanks you, but how I could go to the ball?” fairy godmother then went into the kitchen and saw four rats. She turned it into golden four horses and into a beautiful buggy. Before leaving home, the fairy godmother said “ Upik Abu, you  have to go home at middle of the night, because this magic will work only until midnight!

“ When Upik Abu entered the palace, everyone was sturned by her beautiful face. In fact, no one recognized her because she was so different. Upik Abu was so pretty with the dress, crown and the glass slipper. A handsome prince also saw Upik Abu and he fell in love. He met Upik Abu  and asked, “ Do you want to dance ?” and she said “ yes, I want to dance during the night and she was so happy at that night. She forget  the fairy godmother warning that she should go home in the middle of the night. At the last moment, Upik Abu remembered her promise to the fairy godmother and went home. “I will must went”, she said. She ran quickly and one of her crown left but the did not came back to pick it up. Upik Abu arrived home a few minutes later. When she arrived, the duck in twelve. The horses and the buggy back into previous shape and she did not wear the glass slipper, crown and the beautiful dress anymore. After that, her stepmother and stepsisters came home and talked about beautiful woman who danced with the prince “Bobby”. They identity of the woman who suddenly appeared.

In the palace, prince Bobby kept thinking about Upik Abu and he felling in love. Prince wanted to found out the identity of the girl, but he even did not know her name prince had only found the crown, and he said,” I will find her, and I will marry the woman whose head bits into this crown!”

In the next day, the prince and his bodyguards went to all the exciting home. They wanted to find a woman whose head matched with the size of the crown. Upik Abu stepsisters also tried the crown, but their head do not match. When Upik Abu wanted to tried, her stepmother prevented and forbidden her. However, the prince said,” let her trying!” when Upik Abu were a crown, she had a perfect leg for the crown. The prince then recognized her and he was convinced that she was a woman who dance with him at the dance. Prince Bobby  married Upik Abu  and they lived happily.

The inspiration from by “CINDERELLA” story